Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: I have done some work with marriages in the past. Christians like to say that adultery necessitates divorce. If you look at who he said that to, Jesus was speaking to hard hearted Jews who didn't know anything about forgiveness. 2 cor 7 talks about separation because of not being able to live together. Continuros adultery would fit that bill

Grammatical and spelling errors: Seems intact

What I liked? We think all our personal decisions are just personal. I think you get that they are not. Marriage is a covenant, a sacred promise, dependent on God as a witness. Is it revolutionary to follow God. You bet it is. Lies do tend to build on each other. Good imagery

What I disliked: Revolutionary act doesn't seem quite right. Maybe pact seems off too. Pact seems to be what countries do. Revolutionary act means you have to be revolting against something. Maybe there was a revolt against dependent living in the beginning. One flesh goes well beyond physical into the realm of physical and emotional and mental

How the piece made me feel: 2=1 ministries has their founders basically reuniting after a similar history. It is in over 100 countries. She prayed her husband back into the relationship. You might check out her testimony. They have a booklet called first aid for marriages

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