Hi Sarah Kate ! Thank you for allowing me to read your writing. I hope my comments are helpful. However, you are always encouraged to follow your own instincts and always keep writing!

First Impressions:
Creepy! Out-of-control muses seem to be a popular topic.

Suggestions:
Something about the first couple of paragraphs fell flat. I'm not exactly sure what. Maybe they don't show her frustration enough.

I know this is meant to be a flash, but it could really use a bit more description. What did Miranda's muse look like?

Spelling/Grammar:
But her Muse’s anger was so powerful, he brushed her attempts to get him out of her mind away easily, and
This is a particular pet peeve of mine and I see it all the time. Sentences should not begin with conjunctions (and, or, but). They are meant to combine ideas. If you're trying to create short sentences to add to the suspense, try either dividing the two sentences another way or simply cut the word "but".

Miranda could feel her Muse’s anger rolling over her like a storm.
Nice description! I could picture this!

Ashley

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