Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Birthday

Overall impression of piece: Sorry I missed your happy 29'th. Hope it was a good one. There is no doubt where you stand on thois. You have put the facts down pretty well and it is an issue. I get that. I like definite opinions. I tend to be kind of in the middle and my wife acuses me of a definite maybe.. Not here

Grammatical and spelling errors: Intact. Good.

What I liked? This in someways is a marvelous medium although I present the opposite side later. I guess I never wake up in the morning thinking about it. With this, I can. Are you right? I am not sure. See below. I like the two counterpoised views. People think about what they think about. It never goes away

What I disliked: What does society owe us? I think that is the question behind all of this. Life liberty and the pursuit of happiness. Of course, I can't be exstatic while I am making someone else miserable. Whose rights take precedence? Who determines that? Do I think birth parents should talk to natural offspring. Absolutely It may not be a high point of my life, but I do talk about those things sometimes. It is what makes us real. We all have them. They shouldn't expect a relationship. That is unrealistic and it takes time. It won't happen because I say so. I guess I never realized what an intricate issue this was. Maybe it deserves a full essay. You are trying to convince me in something that may not be the best medium. Should we be able to abolish closed adoptions. I don't think that is too unreasonable. The genetic information can be life saving.

How the piece made me feel: I have beaten the feeling part to death already. Congratulations on being exactly who you are. You are a gift.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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