The following words are my personal opinions and interpretations. They are meant to encourage this writer and her readers. Please, read carefully.

I think that this is a cute beginning to something more. The ending is funny. So is this woman's obsession with romance. I used to like to read romance novels, too. But, they are pretend, not even close to reality. These two characters are good for one another because of their complementary perspectives. I think that this is the best thing going for future writings based on this draft.

Doorman.