Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece This is your usual good work. I have to review numerous bad writers to balance out your ratings. It is evocative. It is easy to identify with without being overly simple.

Grammatical and spelling errors: Cacophany is mispelled. That is almost as picky as I can get.

What I liked? We have, in this world a tyranny of the mind. We think it is the way we will settle all our problems. The reality is that is what created them in the first place. The conclusion is simple and direct. I think you can hear Him in the thunder of a waterfall or the dense quiet of nothing between you and God. I really get this. Since I lost my job and have been on disability, money and fear have been rampant. I think some of those silent times when there are no distractions are some of the best times for communication.

What I disliked: Our we waiting for the veil to disappear or more for the signs of heaven? I would suggest the later.. The veil is part of normal so we probably would not even think about it much.. Through the senses would mean to me physical senses. I don't think that is what you mean here. I think there is an inner way of knowing anything that has nothing to do with mind--there are plenty of genius agnostics.. If you can see touch or taste it, you wouldn't need any faith

How the piece made me feel: Sometimes I feel I am in the music. I am being played. I play clasical guitar and know about plunking things. Some composers put in wild chords (like Tsycofsky) just so they can resolve them. God is an eccentric composer? Sometimes I wonder.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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