It is my pleasure to review
"Kaden's Lullaby" 
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as a Member-To-Member Review

This is one of the best poems you have written, Pat—in my humble opinion. Your love of Kaden comes through with every line and verse. The meter and rhyme are perfect. And the message reads like a prayer for your little grandson.

Of course, you know me; I have to point out a comma error.
You wrote:
You're Grandma's music, played with such joy.
That comma after "music" does not go there because the ending participial phrase modifies music, a word immediately next to the phrase (Comma usage Rule #10).


Thank you for this opportunity to review your work. My suggestions and opinions are offered only in the spirit of helpfulness from one aspiring writer to another.

  Winnie Kay  



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