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| (5.0)| ** Images For Use By Upgraded+ Only ** Hi Arwen9 . This is a review from "Showering Acts of Joy Group" !  After reading "Invalid Item" I have the following comments to offer.  The Heart of the Story/Poem: Oh, how I was cringing as I read this chapter! I was pleading with Rune for the inevitable not to happen, and my heart ached with sympathy, rage, and a want to see him far away from that awful place and man! You also pricked my curiosity with the start; Rune's strange affliction. Things That Might Make It Better: You handled the only delicate part here with tact and skill, for which I applaud you! Truthfully, I found nothing that needed improvement.  Things I Like:As I previously stated, I liked how you handled the chapter as a whole. Many authors would have shied away from such situations, or gone too far in either extreme direction and turned off readers entirely. You, on the other hand, did very well in portraying events and the character's reaction to it all in a comfortable way. Bravo! Gelendra
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