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The Ex-Girlfriends Club  [ASR]
Quotation Inspiration Contest Entry - 2/28/08
by Jeff
Review by Noyoki
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Rated: ASR | (4.0)
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Hello Jeff

My Thoughts:

I had to admit that the title made me think this was going to be worse than it was, angry women all wanting revenge, that sort of thing. But, this was delightful. I think that half those poor women are probably grateful that they are no longer dating him. It makes me wonder how the soon to be wife is going to survive being married to him.

My Favorite Part:

The list of ex-girlfriends and their many battle wounds was my favorite part. It would be kind of fun to see a series of micro fiction just detailing this man's dating history starting from his very first girlfriend, and ending with his new wife. I can see now that something humorous and slightly tragic will undoubtedly happen during the wedding.

My Suggestions:

One quick edit. In the line: I dated someone knew, knew should be new. I liked the ending, but it feels like he got cheated, since the scars aren't really a secret, more of an observation that she half qualifies for the club.

Aside from that, I found this to be extremely giggle worthy.


Thank you,

~Noyoki

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