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Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: I think we have all been there on a dark night and stared out at something. Maybe it could be a UFO. I like lighthouses my sellf and wonder about the people who lived there and what they saw and felt. I can suddenly be "not here" The light from andromeda makes me think of what they thought and who they were. Obviously they are long dead now.

Grammatical and spelling errors Reads well

What I liked? I think what you say is true. it is the first thing that makes poetry relevant? Sometimes I feel engulfed and full of the love the universe has for me as a speck therein. I can't hardly understand it, but I know of its truth.

What I disliked Hourglass and sand seems a little cliche. I don't get a real idea why this is important. Emotions are hard to put across. I feel kind of in the dark about this. didn't resonate.

How the piece made me feel: Beautiful description. I catch some of the awe and majesty. I think we live in a world that is overwelming and takes us into it.

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