Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: I hope this is autobiographical. I would like to know a person like this. Most people really don't have time. Part of it is our humaness and a limited time on this earth. For one brief shining momment(cliche I know) I am here, with you. I know people like this, but they are as rare as hen's teeth. Maybe one or two a life time.

Grammatical and spelling errors: Well punctuated. Reads well

What I liked? From my impressions, I think you can tell this is pretty evocative for me. I get this. We can touch the earth with beauty and truth. Few do

What I disliked: This is written person neutral. My first thought was autobiographical. Why not write it about the reader? I think it could be a wonderful challenge and impetus to grow.

How the piece made me feel: Everything you say is so right on. Look at supermodels. I wouldn't want to spend 5 minutes with them. It is something phoney in their eyes and the shanigans. I couldn't tolerate being around them. I have been married for 38 years.

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