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Review of One Tree Hill  
Rated: E | (4.5)
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The rhythm of the is slightly rough in some line, which emphasizes the theme of the poem. The rhyming pairs are well-chosen, I especially like the choice of debate and late.

The poem followed the form and I found no technical problems.

The last stanza is my favorite because it contained most of the poem emotions of mourning and sadness. Write on.

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