The first paragraph hooked me and I wanted to know more. The descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. The first person point of view is a good choice because it gives emotion to this story.

I found no technical problems.

I like the information about the protest. This is a well-planned and written story that keeps the readers attention to the end. Write on.




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .