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Review by Grace♥Leo...
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Hi Marcia,
I hope you had a great birthday!
My over all impression of this piece is excitement! I love Martina also. The song "Broken Wing" she wrote for me, I just know it. I also feel your strong faith in God, that is why you feel good about yourself, or you are comfortable in your own skin. It's a good feeling right? I know.
Your joy spills over triple fold here. Only one suggestion see below,
"I am mother of three amazing children that I raised by the grace of God on my hands and knees." I would insert (a) between am and mother. That's it. Continue to write, write,write!

Grace L
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