Hello Elle - on hiatus Review of "Invalid Item" General Comments and Emotional Impact The poem is about the keruru a pigeon found in New Zealand. In the poem, you describe seeing and hearing the bird. The imagery is good and the picture given with the poem adds to the visuals of the poem. The scene is well written and collects the features of the bird. You have manged well with the form of the poem. Form and Rhyme Scheme There is no rhyming pattern according to the form of the poem which is a septet. The syllable count is perfectly done. Title and description The title fits the content very well and the description below is interesting and apt. Suggestions and mistakes No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found. Overall A very good poem and I am giving it 4.5 stars. Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing! ~Princess Zelda ** Image ID #1869732 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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