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General Comments and Emotional Impact

The poem is about fighting the cause of the endangered Dolphins in New Zealand. The first two lines of the poem itself brings about the sense of freedom that is needed for the dolphins. The next two lines talk about the endangered species, by letting the reader know the names. The next stanza shouts for the justice needed for these dolphins. The second line in this stanza is very nicely written, there is assonance in the line with the word beginning with "R". The last two lines ask for the freedom that each dolphin deserves, to swim free.You have made a perfect ending by writing swim free in the end as well. Well written.

Form and Rhyme Scheme

There is no rhyming pattern in the poem. The poem belongs to the Double Acrostic form and it perfectly follows the rule and also shows us the acrostic clearly with the blue for those alphabets alone.

Title and description

The title fits the content very well and for an acrostic the title should be the acrostic itself and that is perfect here. The description below is interesting and talks about the content in brief.

Suggestions and mistakes

No mistakes in punctuation, spelling or grammar can be found.

My Favourite Lines

"Everyone must do their part to advocate,
Each dolphin deserves to swim free."

Great lines and perfect ending!

Overall

A very good poem so I am giving it 5 stars.

Thank you for sharing your work. Keep writing!


~Princess Zelda





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