Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Birthday

Overall impression of piece: Hopefully you didn't go here for your birthday. This has elements of all the horid figures that come to life in Shakespear's plays. What gives us pause. I think often it is the things we know or have known. Think of Marley's ghost from Christmas Tale

Grammatical and spelling errors Seems intact.

What I liked? Kind of a classical feel to this. This reads well. Who knows. If you were from the 40's you would say the shadow knows. Who knows what lurks in the hearts of men? Of course you know the answer. The shadow knows. He haunted bad guys. Interesting and appropriate pictures

What I disliked Shadows kind of overplayed. I would think of the things hidden in those shadows more.

How the piece made me feel Didn't really send me to wonder about dark things. Could have been better. Maybe it is just that I don't want to go there.

Hope this helps. Use my ideas as your creativity alchemy deems fitting

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