Review of showering acts of joy member to member

Why I chose this piece: Anniversary

Overall impression of piece: An essay from someone who thinks on a subject that is near to my heart. I have an ecology section on my port. This is a piece that is dense with detail. It is written in an informal style, which works well with the heavy thoughts invoved.

Grammatical and spelling errors

What I liked? You have done a marvelous job of surrounding a tremendously technical subject with the reality of there is enjoyment in nature. People will do things because they feel like it. It is the nature of man. I think emotional and facts are pretty well represented.

What I disliked: Does technology cause us to spend more time at home, or does it cause us to be divorced from who we really are. I think in many ways, we have forgotten. Stuff about climate change is not considered a given by many people--probably illinformed and biased--and a comment that the majority of earth scientists agree would be in order.

How the piece made me feel: Balanced pretty well on emotional and mental. Maybe the logic side could be built up some as described above.

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