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Happy WDC Anniversary DOC,


The Heart of the Story/Poem:
It seems I have seen something on TV similar to this. I know Doll House. That is the feel it has. It also feels very serious, almost business-like. It took me a minute to get what model meant.

Things That Might Make It Better:
This line there is a typo. I believe you meant “This” . “The is about the MODEL issue again, isn't it?”

I like that the woman begins to think on her own two feet, instead of being a remote control Stepford wife thing. She wasn’t going to allow Fred to just toss her out like a worn out toy. Your character has already made a change in a very short order. I like that. I like the idea of showing a man that a woman can’t be programmed to do this or that even though they try.

A wonderful glimpse into your portfolio. I am glad I found this piece to review. Thank you for allowing me the opportunity.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .