Hi WhoMe ,

Happy Birthday from WDC

The Heart of the Story/Poem: Your tale begins leisurely then proceeds to a hike then to a jog a run then back down again. The build is great. The descriptions are well written and make me feel as if I experienced the ride with you.

Things That Might Make It Better:
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Things I Like:
Your line: It was here Crayola drew her muse for creating new crayons. I like this line because I have a special place in my heart for Crayola. I was there on the mountain taking in the colors and the view. I could smell the mountain air.

Your story is fantastic! Keep writing!

Grace L
"Showering Acts of Joy Group" 

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .