Once again another very fluent story.

I like the level of technobabble. Without being too complicated, it holds up.

You make this stuff look easy. I do think it would be harder to hide the new bulk though. Especially around the neck and jowls/cheeks.

I wonder how long you have been writing stories like this?

Well done.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .