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Reflection Of A Poet has to be something about poetry. I couldn't resist investigating to find out what this was about because I write poetry and am interested in learning about poetry.
Description:
Train of thought, off on a tangent I like trains and have gone off on a tangent, so this seems to be something I should read.
         *Bell* FIRST IMPRESSIONS *Bell*
Wonderful and exciting poem which I enjoyed very much.
         *ThumbsUp* I LIKE *ThumbsUp*
What and why:
The rhythm was superb for me. I enjoyed reading and having the flow work well. The subject of writing and poetry went well together and shed much light into writing poetry for me. I hope to be able to become better at writing poetry and you showed me another approach to creating content and rhythm so that poetry has a different new voice and can have a new life.
plot:
I dived head first into the subject of writing poetry and ebjoyed the entire poem. The two characters: writing and the poetry had interesting interactions.
Rhythm:
Wow, very, nice rhythm which I would like to study and learn to achieve. It seemed to flow well and have some very slight bounce toward the next thought which successfully carried me along from word to word as I took in all of the treasure you gifted to me through your poem.
         *Binoculars* OBSERVATION(S) *Binoculars*
Thrilling and wonderful example of a nicely written poem with content to enjoy and learn from so that I can achieve becoming a better writer of poetry.
         *Question* QUESTION(S) *Question*
Where and how did you learn how to write this poem and poetry?
         *InfoV* SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: *InfoV*
Please continue to share your poetry styles and knowledge, thank you.
My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
This poem is full of what I would like to be able to create. I would like to learn and share more poetry with readers.
*Thought* CONCLUSION(S) *Thought*

Please keep writing and sharing your artistic writing ability.
My thoughts and Impressions:
Who is it in the looking glass?
That bears resemblance to my eye?
Same crook of brow, same tilt of head
Same slant of nose and smile shy

This went so well together and flowed very nicely. I very much enjoyed reading this because it showed me how you can connect words so that the rhythm goes smoothly and the idea isn't lost because of having to find words which fit within the structure of the sentences or stanzas. The clues show that the writer is seeing the reflection of self and possibly reflections of what has been written which are a part of the writer.


Who is it that looks out at me?
Whene’er I deign to wander past
Are all her thoughts as grave as mine?
Is she as lost in thoughts so vast?

A reflection of being lost in thought and possibly having writers block shows that this is something reflected to the writer and something which is a challenge shared by writers in general although it is most a matter of the reflecting of this problem which is of concern to the writer. I can relate to this challenge and have had to work hard and diligently to get through the obstacles of not being able to put thoughts and words together to create word art which a reader can enjoy.



{c;grape}Does her mind swirl with big ideas?
Do magic words come into view?
Obscuring daily wants and needs
And setting pen to strive anew
I can relate to these questions and understand why the writer would ask of the reflection these questions. It's like the writer sees and yet does not see exactly who and what is reflecting back as she gazes at the mirror.


To craft a masterpiece of sound
A work that speaks of mystery
Beguiling words that fill the page
And show the writer’s artistry

Many writer dream of being able to do this. I would like to be able to achieve and build writing skills such as these so that i can better share knowledge, information, and word art for the reader to feast upon. This is a treasure for the reader and I hope to be able to create such treasure in the future.


With taste and texture wantonly
Besieging pages crisp and white
Emerging as a stanza’s wish
To flourish in poetic light

Wow! To shed light and share ideas with words placed so that they melt and flow as the sweet taste of honey. With more exposure and thought about this poem and poetry the reader and I will be able to see and learn about creating vivid images and using words so that reading what needs to be expressed is a delight to the reader and a smooth reading experience full of uplifting of the spirit and filling of light to the soul.



}c:grape}I glance upon the glass again
And there she is with furrowed brow
To see her poised with pen in hand
One might believe she’s me, somehow.
Yes, it is and you proved it with your word art which you shared with me. It is possible that it could be another person, however, it would be only if you were writing about what you would be trying to aspire to accomplish in your early writing. This gives me hope and joy in writing especially poetry. I have with in my the ability to learn and create, therefore, I know as long as I do not quit, I will succeed. The most important message I find with in this poem is the determination to believe and strive to nurture this belief until there is success.
*ThumbsUp*Please continue to share your word art, experiences, and writing knowledge, thank you. I appreciate having the opportunity to read and review your word art as well as learn about writing because you took the time to write and share what is in your heart and mind. *Angel* Safe travels in your life and writing, and many blessings.

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