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Hello, Lee:Namaste!
I chose your port because I liked your handle. I read a lot of eastern spiritual books. Mostly, I read the Tao Te Ching. I liked the way you started your cool story was with that eye-opening quote from Allen Carr. I read it a while back it is profound, to me to wait for the monster to die.

I liked your simple plot about Fred, the writer, and his battle with his pals "Nic" and "Caff." I am stuck on several cups of coffee a day and have withdrawls. I don't drink or smoke anymore, but I used to be able to party. Now that I am older, it is catching up to me. But it was fun and I still have fun times ahead.

Your character, Fred, was pretty sharp. He thought about the problem, made the decision and "Poof." He basicly told those two monsters to take a hike. I enjoyed reading your story. I write true animal adventure stories about riding a buffalo and wrestling alligators. At the time, it seemed so normal.

Keep up the good work!
Your Friend,
Lesley

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