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 Brown wooden shingles  [E]
A short story of childhood memories.
by Earthenware_Haven
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Rated: E | (3.5)
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The first paragraph hooked me with the description of the drive way. This descriptions are part of the action and move the plot forward at a good pace. Laura is a sympathetic and intriguing character.

This is a good introduction to a character. I suggest using Laura in a longer story or novel. Write on.

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