Hi there! "Gasp!" your being reviewed by a newbie! I am going to review your poem by using the reader point of view. I enjoyed reading your poem. What I got out of it was the pen really is mightier than a sword. After all how many swords out last the ravages of time like a good written work does. To me the reader I realized that in reality the person's mind behind the pen is what really survives. I looked at the way you had your text centered on the paper and I could see a person's head like shape that your text formed. I found it interesting that is a good way to have what this poem reflected. Now that is great art.

Inscribing a passion, my script and its regime. As a reader this word 'regime' just doesn't work for me. I think that if you use theme instead it still keeps what your trying to say if not better. Mind you that is my opinion and it was the only thing that didn't work for me in the whole poem.

Please remember that you are best judge of what is right for your story! Whatever another person says -- especially me! -- whether positive or negative, is just their opinion! You are the only one who can decide what is right for your story.

Thanks for sharing this item! I only review things that I enjoy reading and I truly did enjoy this piece. Please keep on writing more things just like this!!!

The Run-on King PDG Member


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