A good, gritty entry, and Lasdail's bitterness and understanding of the shady side of things is clear and consistent.

The character profile could be improved a bit, but so long as the information is clear, style isn't overly important. However, things like her race's ability to heal quickly should be explained in the profile.

Aside from that, you mostly just had some technical issues. Some examples:

Rather medieval with the garb and weapons

Healing abilities should be described in the character profile.

"It’s full of nothing, but traitors and mongrels." No comma needed.

"But then again that’s probably just my bitterness built up over years and years of watching my kind wiped out systematically. ‘Til we were no longer deemed a threat." I think that should be one sentence.

"Typical I grit my teeth and continue to walk away from what could turn into a bloody situation." Is "typical" supposed to stand on its own? As it is, it reads weird.

"I’ll your blue hide a pretty penny." You have a word missing.

“Like this, sweetheart,” I think you meant that as a question, in the context, so go ahead and use a question mark instead of a comma.

"The blade slides back home as I pull away, face blank as he chokes on his blood[...]" There is confusion here about who or what has a blank face.

"At least most of this crowd is too drunk to notice what I ma and the other half too drunk to care." Something went awry here, and I'm not quite sure what it's supposed to be. I'm guessing "what I'm carrying."

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .