A contestant who already has some kind of personal relationship with Domumen; interesting, but in this case, not surprising. Considering the traits she was given, it almost seems expected.

It seems a bit strange that she would be the only survivor of her people, though. Was it that uncommon for them to leave their world, that only a single person was away when it was destroyed?

Aside from that, some nits to pick: you had an "our" when you meant "or," "had" where it should be "has," and "tall" should probably be "trail" or "tail."

It should be interesting to see how our last champion does this time around.

My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .