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 The day before Christmas   [E]
How Christmas makes me feel
by Mravce
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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First Thoughts: The first paragraph hooked me with the snowflake. The descriptions are part of the action and more the story forward at a good pace.

What I liked: I enjoyed reading this piece because it is full of joy, happiness, and the Christmas spirit.

Final Thoughts: This is a nice Christmas essay. Write on.

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