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| I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Merit Badge Helpers Forum! is close to my heart because I like helping people, so I wanted to know what this title may be about. Investigating to find out what the content may have for me is like treasure hunting. The idea of helpers and merit badge is a good combination, so I decided to see what the description would tell me about the content. Description: Donate to the Merit Badge Smiles Piggy Bank! Generous donations get a Merit Badge!Well, this is very good and it did give me a clue that this is about donating and getting merit badges, so I'm looking further.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS The title caused me to want to know more, the description helped a little, and now I'm diving into the content to learn about the subject.  I LIKE What and why: I like sending merit badges and giving people on WdC a smile. plot: Very nice collective idea because you want to have a organized group effort so that deserving members can receive merit badges. I definitely agree with the plans and ideas. Rhythm: I didn't have any trouble reading the word art which explained the details about this worth while project because reading was a nice and smooth experience for me. I did have a challenge which is when things got bumpy, because for me some of the information wasn't clear, so I had to stop and re read it several times.  OBSERVATION(S) Great idea!  QUESTION(S) Are you going to consider having fundraisers to raise gift points for this group? If so, I would state this in the information so that people would know where to go to participate and help raise gift points while having a chance to either gift to themselves or other community members whatever the fundraiser is using as items or prizes. Raffle tickets, auction packages, or whatever you imagination comes up with will be useful for getting needed gift points.  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Huge potential for success is possible. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: What is the Merit Badge Helpers? Its a group devoted to helping fellow members send Merit Badges to deserving members that they want to nominate. This is a huge undertaking, and its my desire to make this concept work. If you are curious about this this item, check out the Merit Badge Helpers Survey Form this is duplicated in the last sentence. Who-you answered this, what-merit badges, when,where, how, I guess is found in the forum, or below the introduction. More information would give the reader a reason to look below this paragraph and also help potential members interested in helping you with the project a reason to pursue further finding more information so they could get to be part of this worthy group process. The Merit Badge Helpers, is a group devoted to helping fellow WdC members send Merit Badges to deserving WdC members because they want to nominate hard working and caring members of the community. This is a huge undertaking, because of all the community members who want to nominate and who are deserving of merit badges, and its my desire to make this concept work. If you are in being involved with this this necessary and very important effort, check out the Merit Badge Helpers Survey Form and get involved so that we can give deserving members merit badges and smiles. Where you wrote: "If need any help doing this, let me know!" I would say, If you need any help... I would separate the two thoughts about donations of any size from donations of 30K gps or more,because by using but to connect the two, for me it seems that the 30K isn't as important or it is like a second thought tacked on which degrades the importance of the 30k and getting a merit badge. You wrote: All donations are welcome...and wrote basically the same thing in the next statement...Donations of any amount are welcome, So I would decide how I would want to make this statement and say it once and would not connect this with the statement about the 30K gps donation for a merit badge. I believe it would read better and be easier to understand when you write something like this: I have set up a separate piggy bank that includes all the GPs for this forum, "Merit Badge Helpers Form!",because I need GPs to keep this work of helping community members give Merit badges to deserving community members. By rearranging the words you make clear the details of your mission and why you have the need for the bank and the gps. Also it is a good way to remind readers the purpose of the group effort so that they will act rather than have to reread about why you started the project. Repetition makes for emphasis. Since I need GPs to keep "Merit Badge Helpers Form!" going, I have set up a separate piggy bank that includes all the GPs for this forum.  CONCLUSION(S) I Like It! My thoughts and Impressions: I like the idea enough to want to help the group and am interested in joining with you so that we can work together to help each other and many members of WdC give out many merit badges and therefore have many people smiling. Thank you for thinking of everyone and offering this merit badge help so that many more people can give these awards as well as receive these awards. Please let me know if you have any questions or need any help and I will do as much as possible to my best ability. 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