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| (5.0)   This addicted 2 WdC review is just for you.  I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & Addict, addicted to WdC.  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Lest We Judge! got my attention because I thought perhaps this could be about judgement, judging, or thou shalt not judge lest thou...or something along these lines. Biblical judging like if we judge we will be judged by God, is the first thing I thought about when I noticed the title of your word art. Description: A poem written for a charity (explanation within) did not tell me much about the content of what you wrote, however, I know there is limited character space to write detailed information about what you wrote about in the description area available within WdC item forms. I recommend to you that the description have information telling the reader what is in the poem rather than it is a poem and for a charity event. Something like this would draw the reader to the word art and give them a reason to read what you wrote more than "poem" and "charity". I would be more interested in reading something you wrote about yourself because it would give me an idea about who you are, what you enjoy possibly, or what challenges you, and other information which could bring us together because we have beliefs, or challenges, or interests in common. An example would be: My challenges poem for charityn (disABILITY) OR mY EXPERIENCES OR WHAT I KNOW AND THEN ADD THE REST ABOUT DISability and the charity. Or perhaps judging people with disABILITIES POEM CHALLENGE. wHEN i READ THIS i KNOW THAT YOU OR SOMEONE YOU KNOW ABOUT HAS A DISability...oops, I got my caps lock all mixed up...the poem you wrote is either about you or them, it is for charity, and about disABILITIES. I appreciate the fact that you are helping a charity.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS Having a disABILITY is a huge challenge because people do not understand disABILITY and how each person has differences, disABILITY affects each person differently, and each person has worth and can contribute something to society no matter how large or small , and having an income is not what defines work and value.  I LIKE What and why: I especially like the last verse of your poem word art because for me you are saying that this could be you to the other person and not to judge you from the outside and what they think you are worth and able to do. Another message I got from your poem is that even though you appear to be different from the so called normal person, whoever this may be?, you actually have dreams and abilities like everyone else. This is why I write disability as dIsABILITY. plot: You plot well because you have created a poem that helps charity, helps readers understand that having a disABILITY does not mean you or any person is incapable, has no dreams or plans for the future, or is a thing to have hang on the purse strings of society. You breathe the same air everyone else breathes, you eat and drink, and your blood runs throughout your body and is red like other peoples. I like the I am human too, and have a future also, idea which is in your poem. "Don't judge a book by its' cover," is another idea which I like that I see in your poem. Rhythm: Reading your word art is like gliding through a movie that shows a person who wants to be accepted rather than judged. This is shown with a smooth and easy to read cadence. I'm learning about poetry as I write and review it here and there so this is not a professional or well learned opinion. I'm open to and embrace the nice lines and cadence. There were no bumps or glitches with in the verses.  OBSERVATION(S) I don't think you're a lost soul.  QUESTION(S) Would you want to join us? "disABILITY WRITERS GROUP" Everyone is welcome to join our family. SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I spend my life learning, more than most. I can definitely relate to this statement because, often it takes me longer to learn and get things done than another person. This doesn't mean I'm not able. I need more time and sometimes need help. Now tell me what you see. I see a talented writer who does a very good job creating word art that the reader can see, rather than being told what is happening.  CONCLUSION(S) I'm with you! My thoughts and Impressions: I enjoyed reading your poem because you showed me who you are, what you think and want, and how you feel. It is good to get to know you my friend. I found treasure when I found your poem and your poem showed me treasure. Thank you for writing your poem and sharing it with me and WdC. I enjoyed reading and reviewing for you. Safe travels and many blessings. My other group memberships. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  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You responded to this review 12/16/2014 @ 3:41pm EST