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Title:
My Body is the Church.This definitely set off bells and whistles for me because I love my heavenly father and my body is the temple of my soul.
Description:
What do you mean to you? my answer to this is that I mean everything to me because I mean everything to God. This is a thought provoking question. I would have added some information such as:
This is my answer, or similar words so that the reader has a better understanding about what they will read.
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What and why:
The altar is my heart. means and affects me the most because it is everything. When you have a love for God and yourself, you have all that you need. I cherish my heavenly father. Knowing that you have a heart for the Lord is spiritually uplifting.

Reading your poem gave me a good feeling and my spirit rejoices.
plot:
Having a love and relationship with God is one of the very best plots a writer can write about. Having respect for yourself is another good plot.
Rhythm:
As I read your word art poem, I felt a light and bouncy sensing the spirit, as the words flowed smoothly before me. The poem was well written and reading it was like tasting the very best chocolate with a smooth melt in your mouth feeling and taste like it was heavenly sent. I very much enjoyed visioning the scenes you presented in your poem.
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*Angel* heavenly words given to me by God through you.
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What was the factor or factors which gave you the ideas for this poem. Did you feel that you were guided by angelic, heavenly, and spiritual guidance so that you would have the right words in the right order which would properly and reverently show how you feel about the church?
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Still feel light and uplifted. *Smile*
My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         
Eyes are the windows.
The face is the steeple.
The voice is the bell.
I can see why you would write these lines because indeed the eyes are the windows of the soul. The face shows and shines for God, and the voice is rings true with the word of God. My heart and spirit is full of happiness and joy reading these words.

The color which you have chosen for the font is somewhat uncomfortable and challenging for me to read because my vision has been damaged. I have limited vision so contrast and darker colors are easier on my eyes. Brown, hunter, and similar colors are ok for me, and possibly other people who have vision challenges. I am legally blind.
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I feel like you gave me and my spirit a hug, thank you. *Smile* *Angel*
My thoughts and Impressions:
Being able to read and review your word art poem, and review for you is a gift which I appreciate, thank you. Sharing your thoughts and words with me, with God in the middle, is wonderful and a very joyful heavenly experience. I agree with you about our bodies being churches or temples.
Please continue to write these inspirational and helpful words, and sharing them with members of WdC. May angels be with you, the Holy Ghost guide you, and Jesus show you the way.
Safe travels and many blessings.
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