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| I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: DeadlinesDidn't give me any ideas or clues about what this word art is about yet, I was curious to know what the dealines may be and how soon they were ending or something had to be acted upon. Another thought was that some lines were dead and needed revision or removal from a written work. Description: Because God does have a sense of humorNOW YOU HAVE MY ATTENTION! God is my heavenly father whom I love and humor. I know He has a sense of humor, this is going to be great! I've got to read this and review for you, yeah! Can you tell I'm happy and excited about this?  FIRST IMPRESSIONS I'm missing my own deadline.   I LIKE What and why: My favorite is about God having a sense of humor. Writing about the challenge of meeting a deadline can be very helpful to many people. The ending about missing the deadline si funny. I felt like my spirit had been uplifted with ha,ha funny and amusing response which I believe God gave to me to put a huge smile on my face. I enjoyed reading this story. There is a serious lesson to be learned mixed with humor which helps the medicine go down easier, which is another part of the story I like a lot. plot: I really like this story because you showed how important preparation is for a deadline, in a humorous way. The idea that God has a sense of humor is something I can believe and I know because of personal experiences I've had and that other people have had. This has allowed me to relate well to the characters and events. I was easily able to put myself into this story and experience everything. The deadline against the writer is part of real life and I like stories about real life so had to read and enjoy (dad) David, trying to watch TV, while trying to teach his daughter about having enough time to write so she didn't miss the dead line. He apparently has been through these events before, and I guess could become frustrated. Len seems to be at the age of not wanting guidance and direction, which can get her into trouble. This is classic for someone in their teens or young adulthood, which I think is a very good way to reach out to everyone especially young/beginning writers with this kind of advice. I can see her stomping, frustrated, and annoyed at the contest rather than her lack of preparation. She seems to be someone who has energy to burn and thinks she can do things much quicker than in reality. This I like because it is real and many young people under estimate how their efforts and time actually work or do not work together. Rhythm: Reading your story (word art) was like watching a movie in my head. The film went smoothly from one frame or event to the next. I felt relaxed and yet some excitement was woven in. This did not affect how I read the story, or cause me any trouble with being bored or finding things moving too fast. For me it was written and presented so that I had the right pace for reading. I still can feel the emotions of the characters especially the stomping and ranting.  OBSERVATION(S) Awesome characters showing father and daughter relationships when life doesn't work out the way daughter thinks it should.  QUESTION(S) I think this would make an interesting series of chapters for more characters to show other life situations and challenges. You are good at writing this kind of story. Are you going to add to this one or start writing more stories or chapters similar to this?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: Keep writing and sharing your wonderful stories with readers.  CONCLUSION(S) I'm very glad I found, read, and reviewed your story for you. My thoughts and Impressions: I remember years ago when deadlines would create a huge amount of pressure for me. This was when I was in school. Now when I enter a contest, I give myself as much time as life will allow so that I can get the entry submitted on time. This brought back childhood memories of learning to cope with stressful situations and how to budget time with what was needed to complete a project. I'm glad I learned this lesson. God does have a sense of humor. He is good all the time and lead me to your story. you and God put a smile onto my face. Much thanks. I appreciate being able to read your story you shared with me and WdC members and review for you, thank you for your word art. Safe travels and many blessings. 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