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| A2WdC   This addicted 2 WdC review is just for you.  WdC addictI am reviewing your work as a member of: disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Woe is Megave me the impression that perhaps there was a problem and I wanted to help, so decided to investigate further. Description: A good laugh at Arthur ItisNow I know this is worth reading and reviewing. It hit home because I have the same companion.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS I hope you are doing better, and this should be interesting.  I LIKE What and why: Reading your words reminds me of my struggle with arthur Itis. I have been taking Diatomaceious Earth which seems to help much and gives me more flexibility. It must be food grade and better yet, is the higher quality of food grade. The last part about your feelings and how your joints, being noisy made you deaf is something that rings true in more ways than just the Arthur Itis part of your plight. I have severe tinnitus and upper range hearing loss which is something that hearing aids can help. I'm in the adjustment period of getting used to hearing aids. plot: The way you presented your dilemma about having to deal with Arthur Itis for me is seriously funny and also seriously challenging, so I can see the funny side and the side of trying to get started and through your day. I like your sense of humor because this is similar to my out look on life and dealing with medical issues. Rhythm: You've got great rhythm. The smooth flow of your words brought me from beginning to the end on a nice cushion and level trip from one word to the next. I had no trouble reading your word art. My focus was on the story and actions of events and I wasn't having to work at reading your poem story.  OBSERVATION(S) Arthur can be difficult when you try to get daily activities accomplished.  QUESTION(S) Did you mean (teas) or (tea)? Or, did you have different teas in the same cup? Sometimes different teas are mixed and placed into the same cup which is why I asked, rather than this being a typo.  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: I smile at the thought of holding a warm cup of tea or any hot beverage because I know that this can be very helpful. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: When I read about the noise from your joints and this causing you to be deaf, this was the one place which for me seemed I was slammed me into a brick wall. deaf didn't seem to fit in with the rest of the flow of your words. It did fit in with the ideas, yet, I felt the suddon stop like all was lost and there was no hope. You did a good job iliciting this emotion and I also can relate to an emotion which someone would have if this had happened to them. Although this is funny, ha, ha, sometimes this is serious. I prefer to be on the side of laughter, so I'm glad you threw into your word art a lot of funny ideas.  CONCLUSION(S) My thoughts and Impressions: Yeah for some humor when there is a challenge dealing with medical issues. I'm glad God has a sense of humor and you also, thank you. I appreciate being able to read the poem which you shared with me and WdC members. Reviewing is a gift you give along with giving of yourself within your writing. It's good to get to know you better, Pat. Safe travels and many blessings. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item"  Join us for some coffee and conversation in the "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 01/29/2014 @ 3:48pm EST