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| A2WdC   This addicted 2 WdC review is just for you.  I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Time in the Snow got me to wondering about how much time in the snow, why, and what this could possibly mean to whoever may be in the snow, so I decided to read this word art. Description: A father coming home in the snow. Contest entry for the CSFS A home coming is a good story to read and also contest entries are usually interesting so I will dive into this story and write for you all about my experience as I read your words, follow the events, and get to know the characters, scenes, and all the details.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS  I LIKE What and why: Wonderful story with interesting surprises. plot: Fuzzy snow gave me a picture of snow which would scamper away like a small fuzzy animal, however, I knew this was not the intent of your story. It did give me cause to wonder why you would refer to snow as fuzzy. I tried to imagine this and it is possible to understand why you would make this statement. Fuzzy snow also gave me a clue that this wasn't an ordinary home coming story. forest of Anguish can understand because of the winter extremes the father had to endure. blaze of white dust is an unexpected description and yet, I can imagine a winter blaze and the snow being like white dust. All of these elements tell me that this not a typical story and that there are interesting scenes and characters to get to know. The bag hanging from fathers neck, I first thought odd but then decided there was a definite reason for this and would wait to find the answer. The plot is unique, interesting, inviting, and a mystery wrapped into a warm, happy family Reunion which seems typical with a twist. These stories I find very interesting and enjoy very much because of the clues which lead the reader to guess and think about what this or that may mean. I like mysteries and enjoy trying to figure out who, what, when, why, where, and how because this is fun for me. The scales revealed at the end gave me a picture of a reptile father greeting his reptile family in a winter environment after many days or months away looking for special treasure for his family, like hunting to provide food. Rhythm: Reading your story was an experience of viewing the scenes rather than being told what was happening. I had no trouble following the events. There were no places which caused major trouble with problems reading and understanding each sentence. The pace was smooth and there was for me some feeling of pressure for the father to successfully arrive home safely. The joy of his arrival was wonderful and I could imagine him being excited and relieved at the same time. I didn't feel rushed nor like things needed to move faster. It was like watching a movie or as if you were telling a story with details which would help me understand everything about this account of the adventure.  OBSERVATION(S) I'm glad I found your story and took the time to read it and review for you.  QUESTION(S) How did you decide to write this story?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Reading you word art was very enjoyable. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: themomentthe moment  CONCLUSION(S) Reading and reviewing your story was most pleasurable. I enjoyed every action, character and event because all of this seemed to be real to me and my imagination. The unexpected revelations were well placed and executed which made your word art a beautiful word picture. I hope you will write more stories and share them with WdC members. Safe travels and many blessings. My thoughts and Impressions: This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item"  Join us for some coffee and conversation in the "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com. ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/08/2014 @ 7:34pm EST