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| ** Image ID #1976914 Unavailable ** I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: God's Divine Scene I latched onto immediately because I have love for my heavenly father and I enjoy reading about Him. When I saw this my spirit was immediately uplifted and I felt excited. Description: A Rondel form of poetry about God's beauty in nature.although this is unfamiliar to me, Rondel form of poetry, reading about God and His nature is something I can't get enough of, so am thrilled to have found this poem.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS I was truly touched and felt excitement mixed with deep and soothing relaxation as if He were holding me gently as I read your word art. This brought a huge smile to my face and I enjoyed along with it feeling grateful for your word picture of God and His creation especially His creation of the babbling brook.  I LIKE What and why: The babbling brook I could see in my minds eye and hear talking to me as I read about the spender of God's creation. This soothed me and gave me rest and enjoyment while holding each word in my mind as I experienced your word art. I delight in your words about God and His creation which He gave to you to share with me. This too is a delight for me. I can feel in your words your love of and for God and all that He has done for us. This gives me the feeling of love and security as well as the knowledge that you too have a close relationship with Him. I have joy in my heart! plot: This is a marvelous and wonderful plot because it is about my heavenly father who created all things as well as us. I can tell that you have respect and awe for His glorious and awesome gifts of His creations. This poem gives me a sense of something beyond my human ability to express, an awe, or glorious beyond measure, expression of Gods workmanship and awesome creativity. which we humans ...words do not come to express who power and awesomeness of this plot which you are writing about because God is so powerful and glorious. The plot is above and beyond me because your words have touched me in a way that I embrace and yet am struggling to explain. Your plot is more of Gods plot or rather design for us to see and feel of His superior power and creative abilities. Thinking about the plot in your poem causes me excitement and aew. It is very, very good and shows God through your eyes, experience, and feelings. Rhythm: Much like the babbling brook, the rhythm of your poem gave to me guidance and smooth reading of your words. I am unfamiliar with this form of poetry, yet I had no trouble reading and understanding with no glitches, sputters, or bumpy places.  OBSERVATION(S) I could give this poem picture a hug because it feels like it, you , and God are giving me a hug.  QUESTION(S) How is this style of poetry supposed to work or be created? What are the guidelines/rules?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Please keep sharing your word art. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: The part about the angels singing is wonderful music to me. I can imagine those heavenly voices in Gods glory singing to Him as well as humans through the babbling of the brook.  CONCLUSION(S) I was drawn by divine appointment to this poem and now have been given a up lifted spirit. My thoughts and Impressions: I would like to learn how to write poetry so that I can express well the things which God would have me share, especially after reading this poem. I feel like God would be pleased by me sharing more about Him in writing and especially in poetry. Your poem has inspired me to want to learn more about writing, writing poetry, and sharing about my heavenly father. For this I thank you. I am happy and pleased that you shared your writing with me and that I have been able to review for you your words about God. I look forward to reading more of your word art. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item"  Join us for some coffee and conversation in the "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com.  ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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