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| ** Image ID #1976914 Unavailable ** I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Come and Adore gave me hope and I thought it very likely that this was a poem about God which I would have to read. Description: Poem about adoration for "A River of Poetry & Prose Contest,", November, 2010 gave me a clue that indeed this is about God. I enjoy reading contest entries so that I can learn more about writing and how to give to the reader a better word picture my what I want to share so my words are more like a movie. A movie or picture of God and the things of God are important to me because I want to share God and my relationship with God with people.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS Well, I lost most of this review and now have to tell you over again what I wanted you to know which I hope will be as close as possible to my first written words. I do not remember each word so will rely upon God for His guidance and help reconstructing this review for you. My first impressions are gone, yet I will do my best to five you an idea of how your poem affected me when I first red it and experienced emotions and thoughts from feelings your God given gift to me. I do remember vividly having moist eyes and being filled with a closeness to God, like having Him in my presence. This is as close to my first impressions that i will be able to share with you. I do know that I was really touched emotionally and spiritually in a good and gentle way.  I LIKE What and why: MY favorite part of you poem which is still my favorite is the last verse because it is about worshiping an glorifying God with all of our being and with our heart felt joy and happiness in and with His as our creator and heavenly father. This isn't close to what I first wrote and I feel now less of the feelings of positive and truthfulness which is making doing this review a challenge. It is like someone cam in a grabbed all the review and wiped away. I will pause here and return in a moment. Prayer is powerful. I didn't have this earlier, about god being creator and father too which means a lot to me because For me God is my heavenly father and I really like kthis so these words in your poem are wonderfully awesome and now a favorite. plot: Having a heavenly father and knowing my creator is a good plot especially when He has done so much and created everything for His children. I like how you showed in your poem His creations which gives the reader knowledge of who God is and how much He cares about and for us. Rhythm: Recap is that I remember the feeling of floating on a cloud as i took in every word you wrote. It was like gliding on glass riding the cloud and not having even a molecule of disturbance to cause a bump or glitch in my travels from the beginning to the end of your word art. God seemed to lead me and I wasn't aware of reading.  OBSERVATION(S) There was something here earlier.  QUESTION(S) It is lost.  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Nothing now. What I wrote vanished. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: Unfortunately even after reading you poem again what first happened during this experience did not occur again. I do like the way you presented your feelings and relationship with your heavenly father. There was more I had told you and so hopefully I will be able to add to this with Gods help and more prayer.  CONCLUSION(S) I know that when I first read your poem I had so much to share with you. After losing most of this review it affected my feelings and reactions which I have tried to remember and find again. I'm still affected and touched in a glorious way yet it is much different because of the effects of losing the original review words and work. Almost like this has been tainted. I love that you love God. You show through your words how much you want to be with Him forever which I cling to also. I hope to find more poems like this and to review them for you. Thank you for sharing your writing with me and allowing me to review for you. Safe travels and many blessings. My thoughts and Impressions: This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   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You responded to this review 02/16/2014 @ 8:21am EST