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| ** Image ID #1976914 Unavailable ** I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Do Not Be Afraid caught my attention because of reviewing two other poems, so I thought perhaps this would be related to God in some way. I was not disappointed! Description: Do not be afraid - you are not alone. gave me joy because this told me you were writing about God, I just knew this was so and I would have to read your poem word art. My spirit is awaiting this adventure to start so I better read what you wrote. I'm feeling better after loosing the previous review and having to start again because I found another poem about god and especially because it is about not being afraid. Thank you for this description because I have read it again and am starting to feel not alone more. I did have horrible feelings because of losing the review which I guess was caused by me loosing sight of God and focusi9ng on the loss. I'll be more careful this time, focus on our heavenly father more, and immerse me into your words.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS The love and peacefulness of being wrapped in Gods embrace. I am not alone, God is with me gave me joy and I felt secure because of all the words in the first verse. This verse is a wonderful blanket of reassurance for which I am thankful to you for writing for me to read. God has given you a wonderful gift which you share with readers and for this gift I am truly thankful and have great joy. My spirit is lifted higher and higher as I take in more and more your words.  I LIKE What and why: The first verse brougt peace to me as I felt like God was protecting me and holding me in His firm yet soft glorious embrace. The second verse is the beautiful spread over the blanket which complements the first verse well and helps me to feel joy and happiness for the ideas which you expressed and we embrace. All the words and ideas show extremely well how you and I feel and what we know about our heavenly father and how He feels about us because He loves us so much. I smile thinking and pondering your words and enjoy His safety which is given to us freely who are His children. Your words sooth me and comfort me, thank you. plot: I really like and embrace this plot because it shares with the reader many great things of and about God. You present well how a chile of God feels and what they know. You reassure the reader that they do not have to be afraid because when they accept God as their heavenly father they have Him and He has them in His arms showering upon them all which is in your poem. Rhythm: I had to read and reread several times the first verse before I was able to smoothly and easily move from word to word, line to line and enjoy your poem. Poetry is still new to me and I am slowly, very slowly learning about poetry. The second verse went smoothly the first reading, I must be getting better at this.  OBSERVATION(S) Please keep these poems and similar writing coming.  QUESTION(S) I want to learn more about poetry so that i can write it better and review it better. Any help is appreciated. Do you have any resource suggestions, or suggestions in general for me?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: I have peace and joy in the Lord. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I'm still not completely over losing the previous review and having to rewrite it for you. I don't mind the rewrite part what was horrible was losing the first impressions and reactions which I wanted to share with you.  CONCLUSION(S) You have a very close relationship with God your heavenly father which brings us close, I am grateful for this and thank God I got to know you and am knowing you more through your word art. My thoughts and Impressions: God is good all the time. He brings people and writing together to help them and show them who He is and what He does and gives to us. You have shared this with readers who may be lifted up spiritually as I have been. You have shared What God wants people to know through His guidance and talent He has given to you. Your poem is a guiding light unto the world and God will use your words mightily. I thank you for sharing your thoughts, knowledge, and word art with me. I enjoyed and learned from being able to read and review your poem. Safe travels and many blessings. 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You responded to this review 02/16/2014 @ 8:22am EST