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| ** Image ID #1976914 Unavailable ** I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: Never Lose Hope Where there is there is possibility, so I had to find out what is possible and how hope helps this become reality. Description: Doll Gang Newbie Short Story Contest; September, 2010 Unfortunately there isn't a lot of room to place many words into the description, so I understand why there is nothing about this story. I will go by faith that I should read and review this story for you.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS Oh WOW, you got me!  I LIKE What and why: I like this story because although it appears that Genevieve mat have failed her mission to help Sophia have hope, the will to believe, and faith that god is love and loves her, this may not be so. In the story there is no mention about what may have happened in the last seconds and breaths of Sophia's life. I like this because the possibility of hope and change of mind and heart could and may have happened. There is more joy and happiness to this story because through sharing this story with readers you may have given them a reason to have a change of mind and change of heart which is a job well done for God and with God. I believe in angels and have felt their presence, so this story is close to my heart. I like the presentation which makes me think of something that has or could actually happen. God is a God of miracles. plot: The plot is very realistic and shows how there are positive possibilities especially when a person has hope. Hope springs eternal. I'm certain that you would have been able to add more wonderful and hope giving words to this story and yet, it seems that this is sufficient and complete with no need to add to or remove anything about hope. I saw as in a movie all the details of this story, felt the emotions of the characters, and understood well and with joy the open ended structure of this plot because of the need for possible hope and giving people the chance to have hope who read your words. the picture of having no hope is vivid and real in your story and an equal or even stronger contrast of hope allows for the reader to ponder and think more positively. This will hopefully grow into strong hope. Through your story you could be giving hope to someone who would otherwise be dead spiritually is they hadn't read your words. I placed these words into your mind so that perhaps through you He may share hope and save someone or many people from dark despair. This for me makes your story treasure of great value and many gems which are available for each reader to find for themselves. Rhythm: Even with the despair and possible uplifting of hope and spirit, the rhythm was steady and evenly smooth for me. I enjoyed reading your words, liked meeting the characters, and didn't mind the surroundings within the story. I was focused on the story rather than the fact that I was reading. The events went at the right pace with the right rhythm for me.  OBSERVATION(S) I felt like I was an observer of the scenes and events of this story.  QUESTION(S) It seemed like you were telling this story. Did you intentionally design this story like this?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: I like stories like this, so keep them coming. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I don't have any corrections or changes I would like to offer because I like this story as it is written. You have a good writing voice and are sharing with readers from your heart. "All you can do is your best and hope you've succeeded. You, too, must have hope." Is for me treasure because it gives me and readers the idea that even though you may feel or think that you failed, with hope you can hold onto the possibility that things will turn out for good or better than you expect.  CONCLUSION(S) Nice peaceful story. My thoughts and Impressions: For me God is hope eternal and eternal life. In this story you write about this in a way which should reach out and touch many people and their hearts causing them to have a positive change of mind about their circumstances. I'[m very glad I read your story and reviewed it for you. You write well and have a wonderful way of sharing your thoughts and ideas, keep writing. Safe travels and many blessings. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   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You responded to this review 02/16/2014 @ 8:23am EST