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| ** Image ID #1976914 Unavailable ** I am reviewing your work as a disABILITY WRITERS GROUP family member, as a PDG member graduate of the Rockin' Review Academy & "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group"  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: The Little Angel is of interest to me because i have had experiences with angels, read about them, and am interested about this angel who had emotions. Description: Write story using emoticons is an interesting description. You wrote this story, so I'll read it and review for you.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS What is all this stuff in this story, yikes!  I LIKE What and why: As much as I wanted to read about this angel and the emotions, I almost decided to find another story to read because of all the symbols intertwined in the word art of this story. This is art for certain and more than words you have placed interesting symbol characters with the characters of letters and story characters, so we have an abundance of characters. Well, I'll have to keep all of this straight. I also will have to spend much time looking at each symbol to decipher what it is and then add it to the sentence. Having very limited vision makes reading this story a challenge. I'm up to the challenge. I'm not complaining, I'm just explaining. Yeah, hurray, success, I read your story and it was worth every second and every look and every word and every sentence and every paragraph to know of the littlest angel who has emotions! Can you tell this angel and story has given me joy, happiness, a spirit which is lifted very high, and much, much more? You gave a gift which I well remember for a long time. I think this gift should be given to many, many people. This cute and wonderfully created and presented story is mega treasure more valuable than gold in my opinion because of the treasures inside for readers to discover and take unto themselves so that they can live with all that this little angel finds at the end of the word art you created in a unique way. plot: You have a talent for sharing very positive stories and this one is in my opinion the cutest and bestest I've found. By telling this story in a light hearted easy going manner with the facts wrapped up in a sense of light humor you brought all the angels to life and the light of joy and happiness especially for the littlest angel. This is a lesson all of us should study and take to heart to live by each day. Your plot of many aspects of life and the essential life of a little angel can super charge anyone's life with all the best life has to offer if only the person discovers your story, takes in all the goodness and blessings it has to offer, and uses to their and other peoples best advantage what they gain and then have to offer as gifts to the people they can help. Your story can go viral because people can spread the word, love, joy, happiness, lessons, and ideas and treasures which are wrapped up neatly into an awesome treasure chest of gifts just for the reading. For me the last paragraph has the greatest strength which will sustain me and many people who carry this lesson with them in their heart. My heart pumps with joy because of this story. My spirit is doing cart wheels and singing for joy because of this story. My love of and for God, Jesus Christ, and the Holy Ghost is much stronger because of this story. I have been renewed and can renew whenever I need because of this story. This is possible for all of us after reading this story because you were given the ideas, words, and shared all of this precious knowledge and treasure with readers and I found it with and because of God and his love for us. Rhythm: The rhythm is great and an evenly written path from one scene to the other. I had challenges because of the symbols and my limited vision, yet, God helped me to read your awesome story and enjoy every moment of this experience. As I slowly read each word and decifered each symbol, I felt that i couldn't get to the next scene quick enough because I was drawn by the empathy and being able to relate to the situation. For this reason, the rhythm was a challenge for me to experience. I wanted to progress faster tha I was able. The story most likely wouldn't have had as much meaning and been as much of a treasure chest of wonderful emotions, lessons, and interesting events if I had been able to quickly move from point to point. I would have probably not had the time to think and meditate about what i was reading, another gift from you and my heavenly father. Even though I wanted to move quickly from point to point in this story because of the excitement, joy, and discovering great and wonderful thoughts and lessons which are extremely helpful and uplifting, I am content and realize that it is best for me and possibly othe readers to take more time to read your story. Your symbols may help readers to do this and reap the benefits of gleaning knowledge which they will find helpful for the rest of their lives because of the wonderfully set rhythm and pace that God showed you how to create for us who will see this story for the treasure and glory of God and joy of angels the it shares with us through your word art.  OBSERVATION(S) I can't get enough of Gods hand in this story.  QUESTION(S) What inspired you to write this story? What and why did you get the inspiration to use the symbols? How did you feel as you created this story? Any other information you would like to share with me about this story is greatly appreciated, thank you.  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: I am still high as a kite over this story. My spirit is so high I think it could use some oxygen. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I would like to be able to write a story which would help people like this story has helped people. Perhaps I have and it just needs editing, or I will and it hasn't become an idea yet. Only God could give you information about this story which could help you improve it and make it more than it is right now. I have a suggestion for making this story easier easier for people who have vision challenges or are legally blind and yet have vision enough to read extremely large print. You could add to this item a large print version below the original story. This way it will be as if no other item has been added to your portfolio.  CONCLUSION(S) You are an inspiration and mentor to me. My thoughts and Impressions: I know that my writing is uniquely mine and that I should not compare me to any other writer. With this in mind I strive to improve my thinking, writing skills, and any related actions and activities so that i can be the best person possible and the best writer possible for God and the people who will read my word art. As I learn from you and other writers i hope to be able to inspire people to do their best in all activities they enjoy. I thank you for sharing your creativity and art with me. I've enjoyed our visit together through your word art story and hope to visit with you again soon. Oh, before I forget, I noticed in other writing, you used different colors for the font. This can be a challenge for people who have vision problems. For most situations, black on white works best and sometimes, not for me, white on works for some people. I wanted to tell you, so that you can make your writing available for everyone to read and enjoy it and share it with people. You seem to have many items to read, so I will return to explore them in the future. I am blessed for knowing about your large collection of written information. Thank you for allowing me to read and review for you, it has been my pleasure. May God be with you. Safe travels and many blessing. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"    Paper Doll Gang review, "Invalid Item" especially for you.   HAPPY WDC ACCOUNT ANNIVERSARY FROM "Anniversary Reviews"    The "WdC SuperPower Reviewers Group" are out in force today raiding the ports of WDC for WDC 13th anniversary! Please enjoy!  Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item"  Join us for some coffee and conversation in the "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com.  ** Image ID #1533880 Unavailable ** My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" The WDC Army Angels  Welcome to WDC from "Newbie Welcome Wagon" !  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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