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This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability!
The Writer's Bane Has to be about writing, so I will see what I find. Perhaps I will find much treasure and learn
more about this craft and art.
Description:Common writing (and Writing.Com) mistakes and how to avoid them. is something I need to make certain I know and understand. I hope there is valuable insights into this topic stated in a way I understand well and that will show me how to write better and more effectively.

I like your style which I see and experience as no frills to the point expression of what you feel and believe is the right way to approach the art of writing and improving writing skills.

Distractions are challenges I have over looked, so thank you for bring this to my attention.

Grammar, is a subject I studied years ago, a lesson I should review, and your statements cause me to have a change of heart, timing, and attitude so I will start this week my adventure in relearning as much as possible as soon as possible about grammar.

Spacing has not been something I leave out of my writing, however, I realize that I should make certain that I am exercising this activity in my writing correctly.

Length as far as short stories usually isn't a problem, though I can be a bit ling winder with my word art and string more words into a sentence which may make the story longer than necessary. *Smile*

Show don't tell is what I strive to do as ofter and completely as possible. This is a skill I should focus on and work on regularly, I agree completely with you , so I should stop typing, now. Next item, now.

Cliche is something I do not use or even think about. How did you get the ' over the letter e?
         *Bell* FIRST IMPRESSIONS *Bell*
I did not waste my time and energy reading your word art!
         *ThumbsUp* I LIKE *ThumbsUp*
What and why:
I am a treasure hunter and researcher by nature seeking information and knowledge. I did indeed find treasure. My hope was realized. You presented information I knew and had some understanding of in a different way from others explained and expressed to me so that I have a better and more thorough understanding of this subject matter.
plot:
Writing, and writing better is a plot which I have read about presented in different ways, however, you woke me up, I took notice, and have embraced your view and voice showing me things I can do and must do to improve my writing.

fantasy, I am not into this, yet I want to learn how to write this well eventually as another approach to writing something unique and different. I did start a story years ago and may return to writing more about this in the future.

You and your article have been very helpful and have given me much to ponder and put into action as I learn how to write better and more effectively.

You gave these topics a fresh voice which for me is a direct statement of the facts, what you believe will help writers improve their writing and readers will embrace and enjoy reading.
Rhythm:
Your writing voice, and delivery of your ideas and thoughts work well together which gives the presentation of this article and wonderful steady rhythm for the reader to pace as they need according to their reading needs.
         *Binoculars* OBSERVATION(S) *Binoculars*
I hope to write well as I practice using what you have presented to me and given me cause to see as valuable and useful.
         *Question* QUESTION(S) *Question*
Are there any resources which you would recommend. What and why?
         *InfoV* SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: *InfoV*
Please continue writing and sharing your word art with readers.
My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you:
         

*Thought* CONCLUSION(S) *Thought*
When I review, I often find places where I believe and feel I can add to or give suggestions and ideas which would help the writer think about how they can consider improving their written work. Provided this does not cause too much length to your article I would ask that you consider adding a reference or two which you believe would help the writer start searching and educating him or her about improving their writing skills.

My thoughts and Impressions:
I am very glad I found this article and took the time to read about the subject with in your article. Thank you for taking the time to write for, and share with readers your knowledge. I appreciate this opportunity to review for you.

Because I must rate your article before this review can be submitted, and I have no suggestions for improving what you wrote, I base my rating on this situation.

Safe travels and many blessing.
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SAJ




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