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| (5.0)| Review especially for you.  This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"  WHY I'M REVIEWING FOR YOU  Group/purpose: This gift is just for you so you can write with might and gift delight to readers through out WDC with confidence and best ability! Title: A Snoring ShadowI felt that I should look into what this is about, so following the guidance of my spiritual feelings, I looked at the description and was glad. Description: A poem about my furry friend. Furry friends are a lot of what i really like to read about. I'm thrilled to have found this word art.  FIRST IMPRESSIONS You definitely have a unique and different furry friend, you got me on this.   I LIKE What and why: I can relate and enjoy how you write about your shadow, not a name of an animal friend, but a shadow and part of you to my understanding which has animal attributes which you use to describe shadow. The charm, cute and happiness I feel from your witty poem is a joy and a hug to me. I enjoy feeling these uplifting words life my spirit and put a knowing smile onto my face. I had fun visualizing what you showed me through your poem story. I have several animal friends, so your poem about your furry shadow relating the actions, emotions, and feelings like a pet would if they were human and though like a human, was similar to what I have seem and experienced with my animal friends. I could picture all of these events happening with no problem and it was like watching moving pictures as your words guided me from scene to scene. In the first verse you write about ignoring a snoring shadow. I like the way you chose and placed your words because of the nice and easy flow I experienced as I read your poem. The shadow dreaming in verse three is a sight to behold I suspect because I have had many dogs in my life and they have entertained me while I watched and they slept. The noises, movements, and running as they chased what ever was running away is one of the funniest things I have ever seen and chuckled or laughed about. plot: You have a very good picture of shadow activity and attributes. Your shadow seems to be mostly dog, yet it could have some feline in the bloodline. I enjoyed reading this light heart-ed and cheerful poem. This gave my spirit a very light, floating, and relaxing state. I enjoyed these reactions and was so relaxed, I almost fell asleep. I believe any age would enjoy experiencing being read to or reading for themselves, your poem. It seems to me to fit all ages well. I could easily imagine the actions of shadow. Shadow seemed to be into many activities such as, Rhythm: The bouncy and light rhythm of your word art is very appropriate in this poem. I was able to glide from one line to another without having any reading troubles. I've read and reread your poem several times and do not think I will tire of enjoying this cute and wonderful story in poem form.  OBSERVATION(S) I think and believe that you had loads of fun writing this poem.  QUESTION(S) How did you get this idea? What steps did you take to create this word art?  SUGGESTIONS AND COMMENTS: Please keep writing, you are a very good writer. My thoughts and ideas which may be of interest to you: I would change absolutely nothing.  CONCLUSION(S) The character of shadow seems to have a sense of adventure, and so do I. My thoughts and Impressions: Reading your poem has been a delightful and heart warming experience which I hope many readers enjoy. I'm very glad I visited with you and spent time in your portfolio. I plan to visit again as time allows. Thank you for allowing me to read your word art and review for you. Safe travels and many blessings. This review is given on behalf of "Showering Acts of Joy Group"   Welcome to WDC from all of us at "Invalid Item" You are being reviewed by "Reviewing Reviewers ~ ON HIATUS" [E]! Feel free to check us out to find out our purpose on Writing.Com.My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed"  My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .
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You responded to this review 02/18/2014 @ 10:37am EST