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Review of The Knock  
In affiliation with WDC Addicts Anonymous  
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
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A pleasant hour Kasia *Smile*

A greetings from the "WDC Addicts Anonymous" 

Meet your friend here Joanna pen name Samberine Everose
Your piece
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which was listed as one of the items to review on the "The Kiwi Review Challenge! - closed"  and I’m here to give you a review and comment on this nice stuff of yours.

I ‘m not a professional or an expert, anything I say here is just only my humble opinion as a reader who just like to read and appreciate the beauty and uniqueness of others thru their works.
You can chew and just ignore it, if doesn’t fit to your taste. { e:smile}

*Reading**Thought* MY OPINION AND INSIGHT :
I just relate this to love, a new springing beginning or morning, but, yesterday still holding its future.

*Heart* MY FAVORITES:
The title - the title is good, just kind of simple,but it makes me intrigue, what's that knock is all about.
Imagery - I really liked how you crafted your words, it reminds me of a silent cold night just in front of a hearth, your imagery brings it warmth.
Rhyme and Rhythm - I liked how you deliver this piece in the Shakespearean sonnet,
It just blend with the tone and flow.

*Heart* MY FAVORITE LINE:
Tonight the bright and orange flames are blazing,
Like the trembling leaves of an autumn past.
How lovely those flames that you described it in here like those orange leaves or yesterdays.

*QuestionP* MY DOUBTS AND SUGGESTIONS :
I didn’t find any word that can distract its flow.*ThumbsUp*

I just have a doubt on the word trembling you used there on the second stanza.
I just thought that leaves are falling in times of autumn, and they are trembling in times of spring. I just observed it.

MY FINAL THOUGHT :
A nice piece, using the inspiration of a season in showing an emotion. I liked the different beauty of seasons, but summer and autumn are my best.
Thank you for sharing this piece, and for allowing me to drop some review. I really enjoyed reading and reviewing it. I rate it 4.0

Hoping to see again more works of yours in the future.

Until next time.

Always, let your pen creatively weep.

Samberine Sig.
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