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Given: Apr 5, 2014 at 3:21am
Length: 819 Characters |
805 w/o WritingML
Nice poem that blends seasons and a growing love.
Each season is shown with a unique feature that corresponds with the lovers' feelings for one another.
"autumn brought parting
yellow daffodils turned brown"
Winter is shown to be a season of sadness. But I have heard of a "winter of world of love" too.
Imagery-
Imagery revolves more around nature, which is used as a kind of mouthpiece for love. Flowers are visible and the lovers for whom they are used as symbols are perceived by the reader.
Form-
Each stanza sums up the season and the stage of love. Brief and expressive. It is a Free style poem that lets the thoughts a free vein.
End-
This poem ends on an optimistic note. Not all is lose. Memories remain and there lies the germ for rejuvenation.
It flows well.
Write on!
You responded to this review 04/05/2014 @ 8:44am EDT
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