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The Seasons  [E]
A senryu in multiple verse
by Dandelion Man
Review of The Seasons  
Review by jaya
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Rated: E | (4.5)
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Nice poem that blends seasons and a growing love.
Each season is shown with a unique feature that corresponds with the lovers' feelings for one another.
"autumn brought parting
yellow daffodils turned brown"
Winter is shown to be a season of sadness. But I have heard of a "winter of world of love" too.

Imagery-
Imagery revolves more around nature, which is used as a kind of mouthpiece for love. Flowers are visible and the lovers for whom they are used as symbols are perceived by the reader.

Form-
Each stanza sums up the season and the stage of love. Brief and expressive. It is a Free style poem that lets the thoughts a free vein.

End-
This poem ends on an optimistic note. Not all is lose. Memories remain and there lies the germ for rejuvenation.

It flows well.

Write on!
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