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The poem is sad about abandonment , a cry for love. A tory is told well. flow is well but no rhyme or rhythm is seen in this free verse. An alcoholic mother , tries to take care of the child which probably is born as an accident and did not know how or what to do with the small baby at a time.
A story of unfortunate baby and the mom..
A good read,
Jaya H.



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