Review 1 for week April 3-9 for Simply Positive

Hi Jace,

Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Complications

First Impression: Wow, this just keeps getting better. I didn't expect the sister to be home, nice surprise!

What I liked: The bantering between Anastasia and Alexei, you have captured what really close siblings sound like perfectly.

What needs your attention: nothing, I did go back and read the other chapters as you suggested. I think it is ready for publication.

Favorite Parts: Alexei searching for his sister with his mind's eye. I was impressed how well he was adapting to his new skills and keeping Gaius at bay. I like the balance the two are finding inside Alexei's mind.

Overall Impression: Great job! Thank you for letting me read what you have written!
Lyn




My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Get CASH!" .