Review 2 for week April 3-9th for Simply Positive

Hi Jace,
Please remember I am a writer, I know what it feels like to be reviewed! I have only my humble opinion to offer; please take what you feel is helpful and disregard the rest. Only YOU know what is right for your writing!

Title: Rough Week

First Impression: This chapter I did not find as interesting to read.

What I liked: In the Biology class, the two images of Zoelle. I wondered where it was going.

What needs your attention: I am wondering what the point of threatening the principal is, I felt it was distracting.

Favorite Parts: In the biology class where he did the skin cell test in close proximity with Zoelle. It was interesting to read about gym class and the changes in how he played when he first went to class. The girl gushing was amusing.

Overall Impression: This is first chapter, I found less exciting compared to the others. I know that every story does have a lull, guess I have come to yours.

Thanks for letting me read.
Lyn




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