🌕 HuntersMoon

This is review #1 of 6 for "Simply Positive Review Forum " 

You entered the 114th round at "Invalid Item"  . This means that I am here to review your entry. I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it.

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I must admit, I got behind in my reviewing and the judging for this round is already over. However, I did vow to read and review each one so that is what will happen here.


It is always a pleasure to run across one of your poems. They are written from the heart and seem to float off of the page effortlessly. A traditional format is used, and then illustrated at the end so that those who are unaware of the form can learn from this artistic poem.



I could find no fault with this poem, it is eloquent and spoke from the heart. I felt as if I was transported in time and place to somewhere of tall grass, beautiful skies and a young man, watching a woman from afar. She doesn't know he is there, but he is pouring his heart out to her as he watches her walk through her garden. They have been friends since childhood, and now that they are adults, he sees that she has not the feelings that he has for her. To where his emotions and feelings have grown in a more intimate direction, she still sees him as the life long childhood friend. Thus the romance is not for it is not revealed to her, as he sees her fall for another. This true friend, though in love with her, recognizes her happiness and remains in the shadows.

You responded to this review 04/07/2014 @ 10:46am EDT

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