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Love  [13+]
A mixed bag of contradictions - Cavatina
by Liam
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Love  (13+)
A mixed bag of contradictions - Cavatina
#1978822 by Liam


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As you can see I am a bit behind in my reviewing and just catching up. I do hope you plan on entering this new round of contests and look forward to what you bring.

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Love is about contradictions and I feel this poem touched on that in many ways. The heart as we describe it may be an organ, but coupled with emotion it is a strong and powerful tool in our existence. When love is brought into the equation, there is no set formula and I feel that this poem delivers that message quite well.

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Though originally unfamiliar with the form used, I was able to detect it quite easily since this is written so very well. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to comment upon. Thank you for sharing.



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