Highway of Life [E] Entry for the ABC's Poetry Challenge |
Dave This is review for "Simply Positive Review Forum " You entered the 114th round at "Invalid Item" and I am just finishing up the reviews I promised to do. This means that I am here to review your entry. I hope you find the review useful, if only to find out how well this particular item is received. Sit back and enjoy the feedback and attention. You deserve it. First of all, let me Thank You, for allowing me to review your work. Remember that reviews are the opinions of those reading, and ultimately, the choice is yours on whether or not you choose to alter your item based on the input of others.
It has been a while since I have visited with you my friend and I am glad to have this opportunity to review something new. Fate, chance and destiny, what happened to free will or is this all a map we are following. If so, do we get to take a detour and if so, is that predetermined as well. I like this thought provoking poem and how it eloquently weaves a tale for us to follow. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors to notate. This was well written and a joy to read.
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