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There comes a time in life where change is inevitable, craved, yearned for, and action must be taken. This is a dark poem of life and circumstance and the choices we make. She has made her decision and there is nothing standing in her way. The rhyming was with ease as the voice of the poem tripped down the page stumbling over the tears this character shed from deep within. Very well written. I didn't notice any grammar, spelling or punctuation errors.
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