Hi, I am PandaPaws and I am reviewing you poem as part of the Simply positive Group. I found your poem on the NaPoWriMo forum. First, I would like to welcome you to WDC and the NaPoWriMo group. Your poem is very poignant and beautiful. I noted no errors in spelling or grammar. There is some inconsistency with your use of punctuation. You used punctuation in your first line and then did not use it again. I would, in my opinion, like to see you use it throughout the whole piece. You could also completely eliminate it.
This poem reminds me of the Footprints poem, my mother's favorite. Thank you for making me think of this!

I think of have done a wonderful job!






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